A cold day
Hello, the dawn i don't can see the sun shining between the window, in the moment i stand up of my bed i fell a cold sensation, then i involved again whit my blankets, while the rain fall, is the time go to the job, i eat a breed and milk, next i prepared to begin the day, a cold day, i run because i dipped my clothing with the rain.
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A cold day
Hello, the dawn. I don't can cannot see the sun shining through (or "in") between the window,. In the this moment, iI stand up of on my bed. (or "and") iI fell feel a cold sensation,. Then Ii involved again whitwith my blankets, (not sure what you are trying to say here, but there may be a better word to use than "involved") while the rain falls,. Is theit time to go to the job,? iI eat a breedbread and milk,. Next, iI prepared to begin the day, a cold day,. iI run because i dipped my clothing with the rain rain drops on my clothes.
Hello Byron, pleasure to meet you. Great job writing some English. :) You can improve on your use of commas in this entry (,) by using commas when there is a pause (or time of silence) while speaking. Keep up the good work, friend!
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