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IELTS [5-1-2] WRITING TASK 2 Universites should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knoeledge or experience. Weite at least 250 words ANSWER: Although there are many women can go to the college to learn right now. But it is doesn't means the women has the same interest as the men in the higher education. So I agree with the quantity gender equality in every subject in universities. First, the UN to promote gender equality, for example Emma Watson at the UN advocate "He for She" activities. Because even the female get a lot of rights now, like the right of vote. however discrimination against female is still a serious problem in the world. So i think that women should get education and equal rights to men is very important. In the next place, the advantages of professional gender is non-existent. "The men is good at science, the women is better in the literature." lots of people has this concept in a very long time. in fact it's completely wrong. the women also can be a topping scientist, like madame Curie. As Shakespeare is a perfect writer also he is a men. Also, personality is important than gender in the academic. Subject is a personal choice rather than gender choice. every one is unique, the hobbies is different, the adept are not the same. I think university should not interference the choice of every student because of gender. Thus, university should respect the choice from students, also reduce the gender factor in the school.

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IELTS [5-1-2] WRITING TASK 2

Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words




ANSWER:

There are many women can go to college to learn right now. But it is doesn't means the women has the same interest as the men in the higher education. So I agree with the quantity gender equality in every subject in universities.

First, the UN to promote gender equality, for example Emma Watson at the UN advocate "He for She" activities. Because even the female get a lot of rights now, like the right of vote. However discrimination against female is still a serious problem in the world. So i think that women should get education and equal rights to men is very important.

In the next place, the advantages of professional gender is non-existent. "The men is good at science, the women is better in the literature." lots of people has this concept in a very long time. in fact it's completely wrong. the women also can be a topping scientist, like madame Curie. And Shakespeare is a perfect writer although he is a man.

Also, personality is important than gender in the academic. Subject is a personal choice rather than gender choice. every one is unique, the hobbies are different, the adept are not the same. I think university should not interference the choice of every student because of gender.

Thus, university should respect the choice from students, also reduce the gender factor in the school.

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IELTS [5-1-2] WRITING TASK 2

Universites should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knoeledge or experience.
Weite at least 250 words




ANSWER:

Although there are many women who can go to college to learn right now. But this doesn't mean that women has the same interests as the men in higher education. So I agree with the quantity gender equality in every subject in universities.

Firstly, the UN promote gender equality, for example Emma Watson at the UN advocate "He for She" activities. Because women get a lot of rights now, like the right of vote. However discrimination against women is still a serious problem in the world. So I think that women should get the education and equal rights to men and this is very important.

In the next place, the advantages of professional gender is non-existent. "The men are good at science, the women are better in literature." Lots of people have had this concept for a very long time. In fact it's completely wrong. Women also can be top scientists, like madame Curie. As well as William Shakespeare being a perfect writer although he is male.

Also, personality is more important than gender in the academics. Subject is a personal choice rather than gender choice. Everyone is unique, the hobbies are different, the adept are not the same. I think university should not influence the choice of every student because of gender.

Thus, universities should respect the choice from students, and also reduce the gender factor in the school.

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