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today it's very beautiful hi my name's mahsun I live in Mersin city Turkey today it's very beautiful the weather is + 18 now I want to go out and walk under the sun on the beach but I have to work so I'm very unhappy

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Hello, your entry is accurate, but I would consider breaking it up into several sentences. Here is how I would do it:

 

today it's very beautiful

Hi, my name's mahsun. I live in Mersin city, Turkey. Today it's very beautiful, the weather is + 18. I want to go out now, and walk under the sun on the beach but I have to work, so I'm very unhappy.

 

 

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