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The danger of hiding who you are At the first glace of this topic, I guessed this video will be related to someone having mental problems or psychological illness. Regarding the word “hiding”, I felt there must have something in the same situation I have with Morgana. She started with the consequence that she had hidden from people or avoided engaging with society for 16 year. To my surprise, it’s all because she is lesbian. Since she had lived in Kantas where is really small town and conservative compare with the metropolitan. She was afraid not in conformity with the society and stop express to others what she really is. After years, it’s ironic that she found a great job in HR department where she has to meet all kinds of people and she was the one the most dishonest to herself. She thought if being in the company with policies accepting all kinds of people and without discrimination, she would go forward to it. But it took 16 years that she finally spoke out loud what she is. Nowadays, we embrace all kinds of people who have opposite sexual tendency with ourselves. I think it’s not about the difference but it just about prefer. At the end of the speech, she showed the motto”There are more scary things inside that outside.” It can be the hardest thing is whether we can accept what we really are by ourselves.

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The Danger of Hiding Who You Are [we capitalise main words in titles]

At the first glance of this topic, I guessed this video will would be related to someone having mental problems or psychological illness. Regarding the word “hiding”, I felt they must have something in the same situation as I have with Morgana. She started with the consequence [I think you mean "premise" or "conclusion"] that she had hidden from people or avoided engaging with society for 16 years. To my surprise, it’s all because she is lesbian. Since she had lived in Kantas where is a really small conservative town and conservative in Kansas compared with the metropolitan a bigger city.


She was afraid of not in conforming with the in society and stopped expressing herself to others what she really is. After years, it’s it was ironic that she found a great job in an HR department where she has to meet all kinds of people and she was the one who was the most dishonest to herself. She thought if that being in the a company with policies accepting of all kinds of people and without discrimination, she would be able to go forward to with it. But it took 16 years that until she finally spoke out aloud about what she is.


Nowadays, we embrace all kinds of people who have opposite sexual tendency with preferences to ourselves. I think it’s not about the differences but it just about what we prefer.


At the end of the speech, she showed the told us her motto ”There are more scary things inside than outside.” It can be the hardest thing is whether we can to accept what we really are by ourselves.

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