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Fake Commodity:A Costly Threat Today,we are confronted with a plethora of fake commodities in China,from the everyday necessities to the life-saving industries.Some laud their convenience and relatively low price.However,in this essay,I intend to argue that those kinds of bogus products are detrimental both to individual's health and China's economy at large. First of all,numerous examples of life-threatening accidents caused by fake commodities have repeatedly shown that those products may present multiple risks.For instance,the counterfeit electronic devices prove to be susceptible to fire;the fraudulent medicines are often responsible for the growth of diseases.As a result,fake products have proven to be unsafe,if anything,downright deadly. Furthermore,the sells of the fake products threaten China's economy and suppress innovation.Over the years,we have grown numb with the fake phone,imitation KFC restaurant while the manufacturers have grown reluctant to create new products due to the prosperity of the fake products' consumer market.And,this,in turn,reduces China's competitiveness. By way of conclusion,I believe that fake commodities will continue to become more popular as the pace of life fastens.Given the threats associated with this trend.I believe that crackdowns on fake commodities will be warranted.

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Fake Commodity:A Costly Threat

Today,we are confronted with a plethora of fake commodities in China,from the everyday necessities to the life-saving industries.Some laud their convenience and relatively low price.However,in this essay,I intend to argue that those kinds of bogus products are detrimental both to individual's s' health and China's economy at large.
First of all,numerous examples of life-threatening accidents caused by fake commodities have repeatedly shown that those products may present multiple risks.For instance,the counterfeit electronic devices prove to be susceptible to fire;the fraudulent medicines are often responsible for the growth of diseases.As a result,fake products have proven to be unsafe,;if anything,downright deadly.
Furthermore,the sells sales of the fake products threaten China's economy and suppress innovation.Over the years,we have grown numb with the fake phone,and imitation KFC restaurant while the manufacturers have grown reluctant to create new products due to the prosperity of the fake products' consumer market.And,this,in turn,reduces China's competitiveness.
By way of conclusion,I believe that fake commodities will continue to become more popular as the pace of life fastens quickens.Given the threats associated with this trend.I believe that crackdowns on fake commodities will be warranted.

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