Are these sentences correct?
1. Both nature and nurture are key factors for youths in order to thrive.
2. Some talents are intrinsic to individuals who came from the same regions and families.
3. It should be noted that this cannot be achieved unless trainees pursue special instructions and struggle as much as they can.
4. To prosper in sports and boom the ability in music, certain talents and appropriate learning techniques are essential.
5. If both of these factors are at someone’s disposal, just a few stimuli suffice to flourish in these fields.
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Are these sentences correct?
1. Both nature and nurture are key factors for youths in order to thrive.
2. Some talents are intrinsic to individuals who came come from the same regions and families.
3. It should be noted that this cannot be achieved unless trainees pursue (follow) special instructions and struggle work as much as they can.
4. To prosper in sports and boom the ability excel in music, certain talents and appropriate learning techniques are essential.
5. If both of these factors are at someone’s disposal, just a few stimuli suffice to flourish in these fields. (I think this works grammatically but it's hard to know if it's right when I don't know the subject.)
Great work and great vocabulary!!
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