The first pie chart shows the percentage of government...

There are two charts - a pie chart and a bar chart.

The first pie chart shows the percentage of government expenditure for culture and education in the years 1995 and?/between 2005 (that doesn't make sense for a pie chart! two few categories!), and the second bar chart shows changes in the number of people who participated in arts events (by field of art) in the same years.

In the pie chart it is noticeable that the government spent significantly more money on music than any other fields of arts.

We can also see in the bar chart that arts events related to music accounted for the largest number of audiences in both of years 1995 and 2005.

Include the image!  You need to speak in more detail and quote some of the data!  Not enough!