A trouble thing
Problems and worrise are mormal in life.I want to be a cook, but my mom sed:'no!'it is so bed! Her feel the cook is worst a job.So I crying. If my hardly English,she is also sed:'yes?'All in all,in the future,i want to be a cook,when i grow up!
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A trouble thing
Problems and worrise are mormal in life.I want to be a cook, but my mom said oh !'it is so bad! she feels that cooking is the worst job.So I am crying
my English is not good enough so,she is also sad
yes?'All in all,in the future,i want to be a cook,when i grow up!
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A trouble thing
Problems and worrise are normal in life.For me,I want to be a cook. but my mom said:'no!'it is so bad! She consider the cook isn't a good occupation suit me,cause in china,it's unhonoured.So I crying.i can't understand what's following sentence... All in all,in the future,i want to be a cook yet,when i grow up!
It's my dream,i hope everything gone been ok..
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Great work. I hope you great success.tell us when you open your own restaurant
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