laurel's notebook entry: Jan 21, 2011
I am very happy because the Spring Festival is coming.
Are you know the Spring Festival,let's me introduce you something about this festival.
We will go home wherever or whatever we do . We could wear new clothes ,eat dumplings ,stick couplet, set off firecrackers . We have a delicous dish in the eve and so on.
Now I will have a long holiday about 10 days . I miss my parents ,grandparents and my little sister.
I will visit my relatives. I miss them very much.
Search from various English teachers...
Corrections · 9
0
laurel's notebook entry: Jan 21, 2011
I am very happy because the Spring Festival is coming.Are 改为Do you know the Spring Festival,let's me introduce you something about this festival.
We will go home wherever or whatever we do改为All walks of people in China will come home and get together with their family members.
We will ware new clothes ,eat dumplings ,stick couplet, （and）set off firecrackers . we （will） have
a delicous dish in the eve and so on.
Now I’m enjoying a long holiday about 10 days . I miss my parents ,grandparents and my little sister.
I will visit my relatives. I miss them very much. （now 表示的是现在进行，will是将来）
0
thank you for you to correct my wrong . I am sorry to rely you so late ,that is because i have long holiday so i don't convenient online .
0
laurel's notebook entry: Jan 21, 2011
I am very happy because the Spring Festival is coming.Do you know the Spring Festival,let's me introduce you something about this festival.
We will go home wherever or whatever we do . We could wear new clothes ,eat dumplings ,stick couplet, set off firecrackers . We have a delicous dish in the eve and so on.
Now I will have a long holiday about 10 days . I miss my parents ,grandparents and my little sister.
I will visit my relatives. I miss them very much.
0
I was not sure exactly what you wanted to say so I made some corrections that help the entry to flow more smoothly. I tried not to change what you were saying.
0
laurel's notebook entry: Jan 21, 2011
I am very happy because the Spring Festival is coming.(Do you know what the Spring Festival is?) (Let) me introduce (something to you) about this festival.
We will go home (no matter where we are or what we (are doing). We (will) wear new clothes, eat dumplings, stick couplet, (and) set off firecrackers . We (will) have a delicous dish in the (evening) and so on.
Now I will have a long holiday (of) about 10 days . I miss my parents ,grandparents and my little sister.
I will visit my relatives. I miss them very much.
Want to progress faster?
Join this learning community and try out free exercises!
Don’t miss out on the opportunity to learn a language from the comfort of your own home. Browse our selection of experienced language tutors and enroll in your first lesson now!
Start Learning Today
