good morning!
Today is friday. In my village is cold but is a good day. I have cereal, milk and fruit for breakfast. Now I am going to walk with my dog. Its name is Canela, I love its. Have a nice day!!
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Good morning!
Today is Friday. In my village, it is cold but it is a good day. I had cereal, milk and fruit for breakfast. Now I am going for a walk with my dog. Her name is Canela. I love her. Have a nice day!!
Remember capital letters are much more common in English than Spanish.
For weather, you need to say "it is e.g. sunny, rainy cold etc"
You always need a noun or a pronoun with "es" or in fact any form of "ser"
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good morning!
Today is Friday. In my village it is cold but it's a good nice day. I have had cereal, milk and fruit for breakfast. Now I am going to walk with my dog. Its name is Canela, I love its. Have a nice day!!
Very good! My corrections are in red and my suggestions to sound more natural are in blue/grey.
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