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Schedule A week ago, I had met my major of head. I told her that I took semesters off for a year and I could not pick my old classes. But, she was kind of busy with her phone while I was explaining. After my explaination was done, she looked confused, and she said " hold on ". She grabbed another phone to explain my case to the administration. It took three or five minutes, and then she said " all you have to do is pick any classes who you can pick, and then print out, and then write your old classes, after that I will process it". I did what she told me. But, my schedule has not come out yet. Because of that a day ago I wanted an information about my case. Unfortunately, she was not in her room, and I thought that was a bad luck. There was a boy who sat on the chair waiting list, and I talked to him. She said " you could meet vice major of head, she is in beside of your major of head room". I felt suprised because she is a girl. I mean, I thought she was a guy. How ashamed I was when I realized that. So, I met this vice major of head, and then she told me that your schedule will come out in a first week school started.

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A week ago, I had met.   change to "I met" (for consistency)

 

my major of head.. consider changing to "head of Dept" or something else


I told her that I took semesters off for a year and I could not pick   change to " choose"

 

my old classes. But, she was kind of busy with her phone while I was explaining. After my explaination  

"explanation"

 

was done, she looked confused, and (then)

 

she said " hold on ". She grabbed another phone to explain my case to the administration. It took three or five minutes, and then she said

 

" all you have to do is pick any classes who.   which (not who)

 

you can pick, "you want " to avoid repeating "pick"

 

and then print (it) out, and then (delete    " and then".    as its dulplicated)

 

write your old classes, after that.     delete "after that" and replace with "and"

 

I will process it".

I did what she told me. But, my schedule has not come out yet. Because

replace with "since then" as you cant start a sentence with "because"

 

of that a day ago. (yesterday is a day ago)

 

I wanted an ("some")

 

information about my case. Unfortunately, she was not in her room, and I thought that was a bad luck.

replace luck with "a bad sign"


There was a boy who sat on the chair waiting list (list is not relevant remove "list")

 

, and I talked to the person she (he, as its a boy).

 

said " you could meet  "the"

 

vice major of head, she is in beside of your major of head room".  (needs to be rewritten "she is available")

I felt suprised because "I suddenly realized" (insert)

 

she is a girl. I mean, I thought she was a guy. How ashamed I was when I realized that. So, I met this vice major of head, and then she told me that your (my)

 

schedule will come out in a first week school started.

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