Corrections · 2
Schedule
A week ago, I had met. change to "I met" (for consistency)
my major of head.. consider changing to "head of Dept" or something else
I told her that I took semesters off for a year and I could not pick change to " choose"
my old classes. But, she was kind of busy with her phone while I was explaining. After my explaination
"explanation"
was done, she looked confused, and (then)
she said " hold on ". She grabbed another phone to explain my case to the administration. It took three or five minutes, and then she said
" all you have to do is pick any classes who. which (not who)
you can pick, "you want " to avoid repeating "pick"
and then print (it) out, and then (delete " and then". as its dulplicated)
write your old classes, after that. delete "after that" and replace with "and"
I will process it".
I did what she told me. But, my schedule has not come out yet. Because
replace with "since then" as you cant start a sentence with "because"
of that a day ago. (yesterday is a day ago)
I wanted an ("some")
information about my case. Unfortunately, she was not in her room, and I thought that was a bad luck.
replace luck with "a bad sign"
There was a boy who sat on the chair waiting list (list is not relevant remove "list")
, and I talked to the person she (he, as its a boy).
said " you could meet "the"
vice major of head, she is in beside of your major of head room". (needs to be rewritten "she is available")
I felt suprised because "I suddenly realized" (insert)
she is a girl. I mean, I thought she was a guy. How ashamed I was when I realized that. So, I met this vice major of head, and then she told me that your (my)
schedule will come out in a first week school started.
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