Public Health

Nowdays many people are concerned about their health and look for an efficient way to live a healthy life. Some people argue that having more sports facilities around will improve their health. However, I think that this method is unlikely to achieve the expected result and there are other better ways than that.
Even though people get more accesses to the sports facilities, it will not have any affect unless they actually go outside the house to use those facilities them. Everyone already knows that working out is good for their health, but not all of them actually practice it. In other words, they do not work out not because they do not don't know the importance of exercise, but because of their laziness. However, we cannot follow them every day to push them to move.
Therefore I suggest reducing the prices of organic foods. Generally, organic foods are more expensive than normal foods. Sometimes we can see that the poorer people living in inner cities the centre of cities are fatter than well-off people. This is because they do not have enough money to buy good quality of foods so they just have junk foods or light snacks which are relatively cheaper. Foods are is one of the most important factors that influences on our health., so if If the public take more nutrition from nutritious and healthy foods, they will less have lesser number of problems of obesity, diabetes or some and other diseases that arise from having bad diets.
Also, the government can reduce medical insurance premium. One of my neighbours suffered from a rare disease but could not afford his medical bills because he did not have any medical insurance due to the expensive monthly premium. If the National insurance helps the public with this, the number of people suffering serious diseases will decrease and consequently the public health will improve be improved.
In summary, sum, although building more sports facilities can give people more chances to do exercise, it is not a the fundamental more effective solution. Instead, helping the people who are not having proper meals or suffering from bad diseases will enable the benefit public health benefit.




p.s. I don't mind if you change the entire sentence to make it sound better even if it's grammatically correct. I actually prefer to be corrected to sound more natural. Thank you in advance :)