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First notebook entry: Introducing myself Hey everyone. My name is Annie and I am from Russia. What should I say about myself. I am an ordinary girl. But I want to do smth special in future. I am a girl of seventeen. When I look at myself in the mirror I see a dark-haired girl with short straight hair, dark eyes. As to my appearance I'm rather tall. I have never thought I'm a beauty I whish I were more beautiful. I think that I'm even tempered, rather reserved, calm and modest. I like my friends, I like to laugh and joke. I have got a sense of humor. It means I understand humor and appreciate it.There are many things in our life I like and some I dislike. I like when everything is OK. Being happy is one way of being wise. And now a few words about my hobbies. I haven't got any special hobby, like collecting something but I'm fond of reading books. They give me more knowledge of their people's lives and feelings and broaden my outlook. I like English. And I also study Germany. This year I graduate from school. So, wish me good luck.

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hey everyone. My name is Annie and I am from Russia. What should I say about myself? I am an ordinary girl, but I want to do smth special in future.

I am a girl of seventeen. When I look at myself in the mirror I see a dark-haired girl with short straight hair and dark eyes. As to my appearance, I'm rather tall. I have never thought of myself as a beauty; I whish I was more beautiful. I think that I'm even-tempered, rather reserved, calm and modest. I like my friends, I like to laugh and joke. I have got a sense of humor, which means I understand humor and appreciate it. There are many things in our life I like and some I dislike. I like when everything is OK. Being happy is one way of being wise. And now a few words about my hobbies. I haven't got any special hobby, like collecting something, but I'm fond of reading books. They give me more knowledge of their people's lives and feelings and broaden my outlook.

I like English and I also study Germany. This year I graduate from school. So, wish me good luck.

Well done.  Watch your punctuation carefully.  Good luck!

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