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silent evening Last night I was sitting on my own in my room and watching TV. The evening promised to be long and calm. I wasn't expecting anyone, my roommate had gone for a week, and there were two days before the week end. I had just follen into the plot of the film (wondering if there is any sense in the plot), then, at the very harrowing moment on the screen, the door widely opened with a bang and a person, wrapped in thick coat densely covered with snowflakes came up on the doorstep.

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silent evening

Last night I was sitting  in my room and watching TV on my own.
The evening promised was promising to be long and calm. I wasn't expecting anyone,
my roommate had gone left for a week, and there were two days I still had two days before the weekend.
I had just fallen into the plot of the film (wondering if there is any sense in the plot  the plot made any sense), then, when at the very harrowing moment on the screen climax of the film, the door opened widely with a bang and a person, wrapped in a thick coat densely covered with snowflakes came showed up ( I think " showed up " is better because it happened suddenly; you weren't expecting it) on the doorstep.

 

 

Hope I help,

 

Alex

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