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Madrid The place I enjoy visiting is Madrid. It´s the capital city of Spain and located in the exact middle of the country. The population is nearly 3.2million, and it´s the third largest city in the European Union. It´s one of the most touristic places in the world so there are some places quite popular. Firstly the plaza del sol is in the centre of Madrid and full of shops. The clothes of the famous brands like Zara and Mango are quite cheap as they are Spanish so most of the people go there to do shopping. There is a stadium of Real Madrid as well. Every year the big matches are held in the stadium, so a large number of football fans visit Madrid. The city is also famous for its art. The museum of Prado and Reina Sofía are very popular and have a lot of masterpieces. And above all things, there are many small historical cities around Madrid. They are also included in the community of Madrid so it´s easy to get there from the city centre. Actually I´ve lived in one of those small cities where the Cervantes were born. Even though it was small, it has great atmosphere to study and is very clean. Madrid is not only the place to enjoy awesome nightlife but also historical and artistic place to look around slowly and learn something valuable.

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Madrid

The place I enjoy visiting is Madrid. It´s the capital city of Spain and located in the exact middle of the country. The population is nearly 3.2million, and it´s the third largest city in the European Union.
It´s one of the most touristic places popular tourist destinations in the world so there are some places quite popular. Firstly the Plaza del Sol is in the centre of Madrid and full of shops. The clothes of the famous brands like Zara and Mango are quite cheap as they are Spanish, and so most of the people go there to do their shopping.
There is a football stadium of Real Madrid as well. Every year the big matches are held in the stadium, so a large number of football fans visit Madrid. The city is also famous for its art. The museum of Prado and Reina Sofía are very popular and have a lot of masterpieces.
And above all things, there are many small historical cities around Madrid. They are also included in within the community of Madrid so it´s easy to get there from the city centre. Actually I´ve lived in one of those small cities where the Cervantes were born. Even though it was small, it has great atmosphere to study and is very clean.
Madrid is not only the a place to enjoy awesome nightlife but also a historical and artistic place to look around slowly and learn something valuable.

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Madrid

The place I enjoy visiting is Madrid. It´s the capital city of Spain and is located in the exact middle of the country. The population is nearly 3.2million, and it´s the third largest city in the European Union.
It´s one of the most touristy places in the world, and there are many places to visit. so there are some places quite popular. Firstly the Plaza del Sol is in the centre of Madrid and full of shops. The clothes of the famous brands like Zara and Mango are quite cheap as they are Spanish,so most of the people go there to do shopping.
Secondly, there is a football stadium in Real Madrid as well. Every year the big matches are held in the stadium, so a large number of football fans visit Madrid. Thirdly, the  city is also famous for its art. The museum of Prado and Reina Sofía are very popular and have a lot of masterpieces.
Also, there are many small historical cities around Madrid. They are also included in the vicinity of Madrid, so it´s easy to get there from the city centre. Actually I´ve lived in one of those small cities where the Cervantes were born. Even though it is small, it has great atmosphere to study and is very clean.
Madrid is not only a place to enjoy awesome nightlife, but also  an historical and artistic place to look around slowly and learn something valuable.

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