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Send my family During their leaving, I get a feeling of sad . so I don't want to stay by the separation window for a long time .The break in next second would break my heart . I scarce to cry with tears , it's shameful for an adult man .I just depress myself deeply in my heart. Separation is always depressing. It is hard to watch my family 's leaving . After their leaving ,I call back my wife ,she tell me my son crying for my leaving . I still hear the sound of crying . my son maybe get sense of breaking ,feel lose or just wanna a hug of father . As human being ,we are born with the ability of feeling . we could be sad ,while we could be happy . It's wrong to treat the feeling of sad as a bad one , it is amazing too ,let us become a real person .

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Sending My Family

 

While they are leaving, I get a feeling of sadness so I don't want to stay by the window that separates us for too long. My heart could break in the next second. I am scared to cry  because it's shameful for an adult man to shed tears. I feel depressed deep in my heart. Separation is always depressing. It is hard to watch my family leaving.


After they leave, I call to my wife, and she tells me my son is crying because I left. I still hear the sound of crying. My son might have some sense of [the breakup or the separation]. He must feel loss or maybe he just wants a hug from his father.


As human beings, we are born with the ability to feel. We could be sad and we could be happy at the same time [I think that's what you mean]. It's wrong to treat sadness as a bad emotion because it is amazing too. Sadness helps us become a [genuine or better or deeper] person.

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