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Dear Sir,
With reference to your music programme, I am contacting you to present the project of my English class.
The programme would consist in to spread the Greatest Songs of the 80s. In a survey to listeners among 40-55 years old, we have observed that they prefer remembering bands like Queen, Dire Straits, and others, to listening actual music. In fact, we have made one list with the better songs.
Therefore, we believe in the success.
Attentively,
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Letter
Dear Sir,
With reference to your music programme, I am contacting you to present the project of my English class.
The programme would consist in to spread of spreading (playing? broadcasting?) the Greatest Songs of the 80s. In a survey to of listeners among between 40-55 years old, we have observed that they prefer remembering bands like Queen, Dire Straits, and others, to listening actual to current music. In fact, we have made one a list with the better songs.
Therefore, we believe in the success of this proposal.
Attentively,
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