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•Write about a travel experience "THailand 2nd DAY" 2nd DAY Yesterday we are too excited to sleep, but we had decided to go to Ayutthaya remains , so we got up at 6:am. And we had reserved taxi, so we got to it. we look around remains. we found opportunity that we can ride elephant. when we were wating it , the man talked to me and he said '' lets take pictures with tiger'' and we found big tiger. we thought it looks interesting so we decided to take pictures. we take pictures with weak tiger that it looks dying. and he said please give me chip!! please!! so we gave him it . we thought that if you want chip , say before we do it. and we rode elephant with strang man who handled it. the reason that we thought he was strange was strange voice. he said '' aaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaa aaaaa'' so we laghed and immitated . When this atraction finished , strange man ask us to buy pendants. and we dont want to buy it , but we can't turn down, so we bought it. it was 20dollers. we got reglet. After that we went back to hotel, we go to massage store. the taxi driver said ''I know sexy massage''. but we refuged and we go to normal massage. it was very comfortable. it was normal ! haha After we ate dinner , we became to want to drink alcohol, so we ask hotel man to tell me dance club near this hotel. and he told us and called taxi. we went to dance club by taxi listening pitbull music. first dance club is not energy, so we decided to go back hotel, then the taxi driver said '' I know another one'' so we decided to go it!! the second dance club, there are many youn girls !! So we were excited ! but almost girl's voice was low. Yes, They were male. we were very surprised , because they were very beautiful. we enjoyed with party people. we drunk too much, so we slept as soon as going back to hotel!! On this day , I felt many differnce cultures between Japan and Thailand. For example, giving chip. In japan we dont have that habit. I think that chip is ok. but saying ''plese give me chip'' is not good. and I am atudent !! I dont have money! plese dont say it to me!! and newhalf. we have never seen it until coming thailand. So I felt The earth is big. Thats all . thank you for reading!

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•Write about a travel experience "THailand 2nd DAY"
2nd DAY
Yesterday we are (were) too excited to sleep, but we had decided to go to Ayutthaya remains , so we got up at 6:am. And we had reserved taxi, so we got to it. we (went) look(ing) around (the) remains. (after a while) we found (an) opportunity that we can (to) ride elephant(s).
when (while) we were wa(i)ting (for) it , the man talked to me and he said '' lets (go) (and) take (some) pictures with (one of the) tiger(s)'' and we found (a) big tiger. we thought it look(ed) interesting so we decided to take pictures. we take (took) (some) pictures with (of a) weak tiger that it look(ed) (as if it was) dying. and he said please give me (a) chip!! please!! so we gave him it (to him) . we thought that if you want(ed) (a) chip , say (so) before we do it (give you one).
and we rode (an) elephant with (a) strang(e) man who handled it. the reason that we thought he was strange was (because of his) strange voice. he said '' aaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaa aaaaa'' so we laghed (laughed) and immitated (him). When this (tourist) at(t)raction finished , (the) strange man ask(ed) us to buy pendants. and we dont (didn't) want to buy it , but we can't (couldn't) turn (it) down, so we bought it (anyways). it was 20dollers (dollars). we got reglet (we regret that decision).
After that we went back to (the) hotel, we go (went) to (the) massage store. the taxi driver said ''I know sexy massage''. but we refuged (refused) and we(nt) go to (have a) normal massage (instead). it was very comfortable. it was normal ! haha
After we ate dinner , we became to want to drink (thirsty for some) alcohol, so we ask(ed) (the) hotel man (receptionist) to tell me (us about where we could find a) dance club near/close to this (our) hotel. and he told us (about a nice place) and called (a) taxi. we went to (the) dance club by taxi (while) listening (to) pitbull music. (the) first dance club is (was) not energy (energetic enough) , so we decided to go back (to the) hotel, then the taxi driver (suddenly) said '' I know another one'' so we decided to go (and check) it (out)!! (at) the second dance club, there are (were) many youn(g) girls !! So we were excited ! but almost (every) girl's voice was low. Yes, They were male. we were very surprised , because they were very beautiful. we enjoyed (the rest of the evening) with party people. we drunk (drank) too much, so we slept as soon as going (we got) back to (the) hotel!!
On this day , I felt many differnce cultures (cultural differences) between Japan and Thailand. For example, giving chip(s). In japan we dont have that habit. I think that (a) chip is ok. but saying ''plese (please) give me (a) chip'' is not good. and I am atudent (a) (student) !! I dont have money! plese (please) dont say it (that) to me!!
and newhalf. we have never seen it (before) until coming (to) thailand. So I felt; The earth is big.
That's all . thank you for reading!

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