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•Write about a travel experience "THailand 2nd DAY"
2nd DAY
Yesterday we are (were) too excited to sleep, but we had decided to go to Ayutthaya remains , so we got up at 6:am. And we had reserved taxi, so we got to it. we (went) look(ing) around (the) remains. (after a while) we found (an) opportunity that we can (to) ride elephant(s).
when (while) we were wa(i)ting (for) it , the man talked to me and he said '' lets (go) (and) take (some) pictures with (one of the) tiger(s)'' and we found (a) big tiger. we thought it look(ed) interesting so we decided to take pictures. we take (took) (some) pictures with (of a) weak tiger that it look(ed) (as if it was) dying. and he said please give me (a) chip!! please!! so we gave him it (to him) . we thought that if you want(ed) (a) chip , say (so) before we do it (give you one).
and we rode (an) elephant with (a) strang(e) man who handled it. the reason that we thought he was strange was (because of his) strange voice. he said '' aaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaa aaaaa'' so we laghed (laughed) and immitated (him). When this (tourist) at(t)raction finished , (the) strange man ask(ed) us to buy pendants. and we dont (didn't) want to buy it , but we can't (couldn't) turn (it) down, so we bought it (anyways). it was 20dollers (dollars). we got reglet (we regret that decision).
After that we went back to (the) hotel, we go (went) to (the) massage store. the taxi driver said ''I know sexy massage''. but we refuged (refused) and we(nt) go to (have a) normal massage (instead). it was very comfortable. it was normal ! haha
After we ate dinner , we became to want to drink (thirsty for some) alcohol, so we ask(ed) (the) hotel man (receptionist) to tell me (us about where we could find a) dance club near/close to this (our) hotel. and he told us (about a nice place) and called (a) taxi. we went to (the) dance club by taxi (while) listening (to) pitbull music. (the) first dance club is (was) not energy (energetic enough) , so we decided to go back (to the) hotel, then the taxi driver (suddenly) said '' I know another one'' so we decided to go (and check) it (out)!! (at) the second dance club, there are (were) many youn(g) girls !! So we were excited ! but almost (every) girl's voice was low. Yes, They were male. we were very surprised , because they were very beautiful. we enjoyed (the rest of the evening) with party people. we drunk (drank) too much, so we slept as soon as going (we got) back to (the) hotel!!
On this day , I felt many differnce cultures (cultural differences) between Japan and Thailand. For example, giving chip(s). In japan we dont have that habit. I think that (a) chip is ok. but saying ''plese (please) give me (a) chip'' is not good. and I am atudent (a) (student) !! I dont have money! plese (please) dont say it (that) to me!!
and newhalf. we have never seen it (before) until coming (to) thailand. So I felt; The earth is big.
That's all . thank you for reading!
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