I want to trip. :)

My age is 29 old. But my international age is 27.

That's because, in korea, baby in mother's womb is 1 year old, already.

as i know, It is only for Korea.

and Korean is taken 1 age same time at January 1.

anyway, i have not been go abroad in spite of my age.

I want to go many other county.

until I get a job, I want to trip. oh, actually, i have no job yet.

Because I have studied again and again. It was very hard to me.

And I want to give gift me. yeah~

if i go abroad, I enjoy eating food, listening country 's unique culture like music. and sightseeing!

My these thought make me happy.

But in real, i have few money to go to abroad.

i am working to part time job. and i want to learn English, working my litter job.

that's all. thank you for reading my posts. :)

Correction and suggestions

I want to travel. :)  ( a trip is a short journey, something that is slightly different, but not extensive. To travel implies a much greater time away, usually to a distant place)

In Korea, I am regarded as being 29, but my international age is 27. That's because in Korea, an unborn child is regarded as 1 already.

I know that it is only a Korean custom. Additonally, Koreans age one year each January 1.

Anyway, I have not been abroad in spite of my age. I want to go to many other countries. Until I get a job, I want to trip, but actually I have no job yet. (trip here implies short distances)

It's because I have been a student for a long time, it was very hard for me. Now I want to reward myself. Yeah ! (gift me ->  reward myself)

If I go abroad, I will enjoy eating food, listening  experiencing a country 's unique culture like music and sightseeing! ( to listen to music was correct, but you wrote "like music", this implies that music was only one

of the things that you wanted to do -- so experiencing is a better word here. You also do not need a . before the word and)

These  thoughts  make me happy.

But in reality, i have few little money to go to abroad.

I am working to in a part time job. And I want to learn English while  I am working in my litter job. ( you can leave out the second reference to your job as you have already written about it).

That's all. thank you for reading my posts. :)

Notes: Very good. English writers group related sentences together in paragraphs, that is why my version of your notes, is more compact.

The content of what you wrote was perfectly understandable, so you have communicated clearly in English.

I want to travel. :)

My age is 29 old. But my international age is 27.

That's because, in Korea, a baby in its mother's womb is 1 year old, already.

as i know, it is only for Korea.

and Koreans add 1 year to their age at the same time on January 1.

anyway, i have not been go abroad in spite of my age.

I want to go many other countries.

until I get a job, I want to travel. oh, actually, i have no job yet.

Because I have studied again and again. It was very hard for me.

And I want to give gifts. yeah~

if i go abroad, I enjoy eating food, listening country 's unique culture like music. and sightseeing!

My these thoughts make me happy.

But realistically, i have little money to go to abroad.

i am working to a part time job. and i want to learn English, while working at my litter job.

that's all. thank you for reading my posts. :)

Good job! 잘했어요!