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Some teachers treat their students with cruelty. Recently, there are many hot issues in Korea. One of them is concerning about the treatments students with cruelty in the Kindergarten. I can't understand why the teacher treat them badly. They are just children who are very weak. In my opinion, patience is necessary to teach someone, especially to the kindergarten teacher. Children of that age are so curious that we can't control them easily sometimes. I want to give some advice to someone who want to be a teacher. If you aren't patient, and don't like children, please seek another job. There are many jobs which are fit to you. children are influenced a lot by their teacher. Please, don't ruin their beautiful life due to your impatience. Treat them like your son or daughter.

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Some teachers treat their students with cruelty.

Recently, there are many hot issues in Korea. One of them is concerning about the students that have been cruelly treated in the Kindergarten. I can't understand why the teacher treated them badly. They are just children who are very weak. In my opinion, patience is necessary to teach someone, especially for kindergarten teachers. Children of that age are so curious that we can't control them easily sometimes. I want to give some advice to someone who wants to be a teacher. If you aren't patient, and don't like children, please seek another job. There are many jobs which are more fitting for you. Children are influenced a lot by their teacher. Please, don't ruin their beautiful life due to your impatience. Treat them like your son or daughter.

 

Wow, your English is great. I didn't need to correct much. 

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Yes, you are right. but this problem is repeated every day. We can't differentiate bad teachers and good teachers. Korean governments should educate kindergarten teachers so that they won't make this problem again.
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Well,child abuse is an international concern.Children as a group is vulnerable,and I think exactly because of this,some people with a heavy burden would target the children,for which they gain relif satisfaction.Just as you said,such people must be prohibited from schools.

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