The first note

I just have just got back from my work and sat down at the computer. I Entered on logged in to italki portal and thought thinking ('and thought' is not wrong but it suggests a series of events - first (a) then (b)...) that I should write something in Notebook. I'm curious to see how it works and if whether it helps me to improve my English. Thanks in advance.

The first note

I just have got back from my work and sat down at the computer. I Entered logged onto the italki portal for the first time and thought that I should write some thing in my notebook. I'm curious as to how it works, and if it will helps me to improve my English skills. Thanks in advance.

A note:

Your English skills are very good!

Small gramatical errors and some small additions to the sentences to sound more native.

Keep up the hard work!

I just have just got back from my work and sat down at the computer. I Entered logged into the italki portal and thought that I should write something in Notebook. I'm curious as to how it works and if it helps me to improve my English. Thanks in advance.

The first note

I just have got back from my work and sat down at the computer. I Entered on italki portal and thought that I should write some thing in Notebook. I'm curious as to how it works and if it helps me to improve my English. Thanks in advance.

Really good work! Only one small mistake.