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Once upon a time there was a young woman who did not use to believe in miracles. Years ago, a beautiful woman, named Sofía, was happy with her job, friends, family until one day when she felt a strong pain in her stomach and she fainted. When she woke up, she was in the hospital. Her doctor talked told her about that she had a rare illness and she had between three and six months of to live. Then, Sofía felt panicked and she only wanted to think that it was only a dream, a terrible dream from which she did not wanted to wake up. However, days later, she remembered an old nun she known met one year before ago who had talked about a miracle that happened to a sick man in his city with a sick man. At that time, Sofía did not use to believe in the miracles because she always thought it was they were completely false untrue. But, suddenly, she decided to call to this nun to know more about that miracle. So, Days later, they were talking about this one spoke and the nun advised to her to have faith in God and perhaps he might hear you. It was said and done! Sofía believed with all her strength in the God’s power. Definitely, Ten month later, doctors did not found trail about find any trace of her illness. This one It was in remission. From that day on, Sofía believed in miracles.

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