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A Small Town without the Sun
Second tranche ...
The boy pretended to admire the magician, he said saying "Great magician - you are amongst the best magicians in the world. But why then do you live in a small town without the/any sun?". The magician, hearing this, was very happy/pleased. So he told the boy, "actually, I like sunny days, but my doctor tells/told me I have a skin disease, and I can't mustn't stay/expose myself long in the sun. I like this town, I don't want to move, so but if I don't hide/hadn't hidden the sun, I will/would die. I couldn't think of better way than this." The smart boy came up with a solution and he said: "If I can find a better way to solve your problem, can you promise me one thing?" "Of course"
The boy asked some townspeople to find many big trees and asked them to plant those trees alongside/around the magician's house. "Now you can relieve reverse/undo/cancel/revoke/repeal your magic. You can stay in the shelter/shade of the trees depths of the forest. In there the sun cannot penetrate there." the magician was happy and he relieve undid the magic.
People in this town become happy again, they have had the sun again, and they forgave the magician when once they knew the reason truth.
They become good neighbors.
Good imagination - is there in fact a story like this that you have adapted?
This story is an invention to practise using some of the vocabulary from my lessons. It took me a long time after midnight last night, so I am sleepy now!
A Small Town without the Sun
Long long ago, there was a magician with powerful magic. He lived in a small town, which .The town is very hot all the year round. One day the sky become dark. The townspeople felt this was weird, and they didn't know the reason for the darkness. After a week later, the sun was still had not re-appeared, so the people were all living in darkness. They asked the magician to use his magic to find their sun, but the magician ignored (all past tense!) their request. In the end/Finally they found out/discovered that the magician was using the magic to hide the sun. The townspeople felt helpless, and they resented him, they thought he is a dogmatic/pedantic (pedantic was the word we used) pain in the arse (哈哈哈 PITA - the internet acronyms, slang), but they have had no idea how to solve it.
One day, a boy walked through the town. He was very surprised because he didn't see this had never heard of such a scene before. He saw met a local person townpeople and asked what was the reason/explanation for the darkness. Hearing the explanation, Then he decided to meet the magician.
I will do it in two tranches...
A Small Town without the Sun
Long long ago, there was a magician with powerful magic.He lived in a small town.The town was very hot all year round. one day the sky became dark.The town's people felt anxious.they didn't know what was wrong.A week later, the sun had still not appeared.people were living in darkness. They asked the magician to use his magic to find the sun.but the magician ignored their request. Finally, they found that the magician had cast a magic spell to hide the sun.The town's people felt helpless.they resented him,they thought "he is a selfish pain in the arse".but they didn't know what to do.
One day, a boy came through the town. He was very surprised because he'd never seen anything like it before. He saw a towmsmen and asked why it was so dark.Then he decided to meet the magician.
The boy pretended to admire the magician,he said "Great magician.You are the best magician in the world."why do you live in a small town without the sun?"The magician was very happy to hear this. So he told the boy,"actually,I like sunny days,but my doctor tells me I have skin disease and I can't be out in the sun. I like this town;I don't want to move. But if I don't keep the sun blocked,I will die.I couldn't think of better way than this."The smart boy came up with a solution.he said:"If I can find a better way to solve your problem,can you promise me one thing?""Of course"
The boy asked some townpeople to find a lot of big trees and asked them to plant those trees alongside the magician's house."Now you can remove your magic spell,you can stay in the depths of the forest.In there the sun cannot penetrate."the magician was happy and he removed the magic spell.
People in the town became happy,they enjoyed the sun again.and they forgave the magician when they knew the truth.
They became good neighbors.
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