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forever ☆ i know dear our friendship will keep forever .although we not saty with each other ,but we will remember each other right?? the causes of cancer are being uncovered,maybe we have some pratical to prevent it. trust me ok???dont give up please, held my hand forever .dont leave me alone whatever my heart stay with u .today u make me very sad i dont know whats should i say ,Saw you cry I really very afflictived !!! what should i do please tell me!! i wanna share ur pain wanna let u take easy !!! i know u already tired but please dont close ur eyes ok?? u must be promise me !!!! u said u are iron girl u are supergirl did u remember ?? so u will be ok !!! dont give up honey !!! when u better we can also like before saw the sky and starts !!!!please make a smile for me !!! keep ur heart happy ok??? just remeber our soul stay together forever this life or next life.............☆

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☆ I know, my dear friend, our friendship will last forever. Although we may not stay with each other, but we will remember each other, right? The causes of cancer are being uncovered. Maybe they will find some practical ways to prevent it. Trust me, ok??? Dont give up, please. Hold my hand forever. Dont leave me alone. Whatever happens my heart will stay with u. Today u make me very sad. I dont know what I should say. Seeing you cry really affected me!!!  What should I do? Please tell me!! I wanna share ur pain - wanna let u take it easy!!! I know u already are tired but please dont close ur eyes, ok?? u must be promise me!!!! u said u were an iron girl,u are a supergirl. Do u remember ?? So u will be ok !!! Don't give up, honey !!! When u are better we can be like before, and watch the sky and the stars!!!! Please make a smile for me !!! Keep ur heart happy, ok??? Just remember our souls stay together forever in this life or the next life.............☆

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