Corrections · 5
Hi! I will correct your sentences individually. :)
Y = you wrote it
C = corrected version
Y: I'd like to retire when I am 65 years.
C: I'd like to retire when I am 65 years old.
Y: I'll be really annoyed if somebody smokes near me.
C: already correct :) Good job!
Y: I don't want to have children before I married.
C: I don't want to have children before I am married.
Y: I'll have a big party if I open my personal exibition.
C: I'll have a big party if I open my personal exhibition.
Y: I'll have something to eat as soon as I cook.
C: already correct - good job! :)
first conditional
I'd like to retire when I am 65 years. - that's not really First Conditional, it just works the same way.
Info about time clauses you can find here: http://learnenglish.britishcouncil.org/en/english-grammar/verbs/verbs-time-clauses-and-if-clauses
I'll be really annoyed if somebody smokes near me. I think First conditional will be more natural here because that's always true. You always get annoyed in that case, don't you? So I would write: I get really annoyed when someone smokes near me.
I don't want to have children before I married. you wanted to write get married?
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