My life
Parents always wish their child has a brilliant furture. Even though they don't know how to help you,they also try their best to give you everything they have.
I'm not come form money,but my family gave me the best education. And I am graduated，they start to thinking about my job stuff. They heard that work in the bank is good choice. But i have my choice in mind. It's tough for me. But I want to have a try. They don't know what's the position exactly should do in a bank. They just feel that it would be respectable job for a woman,for me. Exactly it is. It is not a easy thing too.
Life is not always sweet. I think it would be great to grow up when I was a kid. Now I am an adult,everything getting difficult more and more. That 's life. I should face to it. And I will never and ever give up to improve my English too. Live and learn.
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My life
Parents always wish their child has will have a brilliant furture. Even though they don't know how to help you, they also try their best to give you everything they have.
I'm not I do not come form from money, but my family gave me the best education. And I am Now that I have graduated, they start to thinking have started to think about my job stuff career. They heard that work in the a bank is a good choice. But i I have my own choice in mind. It's tough for me. But I want to have a try [1]. They don't know what's the exactly what position exactly should do I could have in a bank. They just feel that it would be a respectable job for a woman, for me. Exactly It is. It is not a an [2] easy thing too.
Life is not always sweet. When I was a kid, I think thought it would be great to grow up when I was a kid. Now I am an adult, and everything is getting more and more difficult more and more. That 's life. I should face to it. And I will never and ever give up to improve improving my English too. Live and learn.
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[1] Native speakers use two expressions here:
"I want to try."
"I want to have a go."
[2] Generally, the article 'an' goes before any word starting with a vowel (a, e, i, o, u):
"I have an apple."
"I have a banana."
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This is a wonderful essay. Can your parents read English? If so, you might consider showing them your essay.
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Your English is very good. I'm impressed with the expressions that you know. Keep up the good work !
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My life
Parents always wish their child has a brilliant furture. Even though they don't know how to help you, they also always try their best to give you everything they have.
I'm not I do not come form money, but my family gave me the best education. And Now that I am graduated, they are starting to thinking about my job stuff. They heard that working in the bank is a good choice. But I have my choice in mind. It's tough for me, but I want to have a try. They don't exactly know what position I would do in a bank. They just feel that it would be a respectable job for a woman, for me. Exactly it is. It is not an easy thing to do.
Life is not always sweet. I think thought it would be great to grow up when I was a kid. Now that I am an adult, everything is getting difficult more and more. That's life. I should face up to it. And I will never and ever give up to on improve my English too. Live and learn.
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