MY BROTHER
His name is Jesus David he is 30 years old. He now live in Medellin, Colombia. He has three daughters who are very beautiful. He works in a school. It is a very good job. He tells me that the city is big and beautiful and it has many parks, shopping centers. It also has a subway .
I would like to go to Medellin on vacation . I might go to visit my brother during the holidays. If I am going, I will bring gifts for my nieces. I want explore the city and see to my brother.

MY BROTHER

My brother's name is Jesus David. He is 30 years old, and he is living in Medellin COLOMBIA. He has three very beautiful daugthers. He works at a school. Is is a very good job. He tells me that the city is big and beautiful and it has many parks, shopping centers, and it also has a subway.
I would like to visit Medellin . Maybe I'll go visit my brother on my next vacation and I'll take gifts for my nieces. I want see that city and visit my brother.

MY BROTHER

His name is Jesus David he's 30 years old. He's living in Medellin Colombia now with his three beautiful daughters. He's got a very good job working in a school. He tells me that Medellin is big and beautiful and it has many parks, shopping centers and a subway. I would like to go to Medellin on vacation. I might be going to visit my brother these holidays, if I am, I'm going to bring gifts for my nieces. I want see what Medellin is like, and I want to see my brother.

My brother
 

His name is Jesus David and he is thirty years old. He now lives in Medellin, Columbia. He has three daughters and they are very beautiful. He works in a school, it's a very good job. He tells me that the city is big, beautiful, and has many parks & shopping centers. It also has a subway. 
I would like to go to Medellin on vacation. I am going to visit my brother maybe during the holidays. If I do, I am going to bring gifts for my nieces. I want to know the city and see to my brother.


(Keep up the good work!) 

-Raphael