My pet

Hello! I love animals and I have a pet. It's a dog and is big* His name is Sultán. I think what everybody should have got a pet bacuse they give unconditional love and don't expect you to change or anything. My dog likes play to ball, and when I can´t because I don´t have time, he is sad. But when I have time, I play with him it and he moves his tail. Having a dog is wonderful!

* when you use more, you typically want to be doing a comparison: it is more X than Y.

My pet

Hello! I love animals and I've a pet. It's a dog and is more big. His name is Sultán. I think what everybody should have got a pet bacuse they give inconditional love to change or nothing. My dog likes play to ball, and when I can´t because I don´t have time, it is sad. But I have time, I play whit it and it moves his tail. Have a dog is wonderful!

'I've a pet. It's a dog and is more big' :  I have a pet dog which is very large  OR  I have a very large pet dog

'I think what everybody should have got a pet bacuse . . ' :  I think everybody should have/get  a pet because . .

'inconditional love to change or nothing' :  unconditional love (in exchange for nothing)

'play to ball' :  to play ball

'it is sad' :  (s)he is sad     'it is sad' would refer to the situation

'But I have time' :  When I have time

'whit it' :  with him/her

'it moves his tail' :  (s)he wags his tail

'Have a dog is wonderful!' :  Having a dog is wonderful!

My pet

Hello! I love animals and I have a pet. He's a dog and he is very big. His name is Sultán. I think that everybody should get a pet because they give inconditional love. My dog likes playing with his ball. When I can't play with him because I don't have time, it is sad. When I have time, I play with him and he moves his tail. Having a dog is wonderful!