Gardens
I wrote a text but I don*t know if it is not terrible too much.Correct me , please.
"We would like to see this project with the human face ,interesting personal story, that owners can share their favorite places through an exhibition of paintings and in creative cooperation with the artist to convey his love for beauty . After all, every garden was worth a lot of work and is part of the owner's soul, his character, his vision of harmony in the world.
We have always admired the famous English gardens and parks and we have long wanted to bring their beauty on the canvas. Paint great incredible corners and such fragments of the slightest ones frozen poetry, because the gardens each year varies. "
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Gardens
I wrote a text, but I don*t know if it is very terrible. Correct me, please.
"We would like to see a human face on this project -- interesting personal stories in which the owners can share their favorite places through an exhibition of paintings, and in creative cooperation with the artist, to convey his love for beauty. After all, every garden required a lot of work, and is part of the owner's soul, his character, and his vision of harmony in the world.
We have always admired the famous English gardens and parks, and we have long wanted to bring their beauty to the canvas. Paint great incredible corners and such fragments of the slightest ones frozen poetry, ?? because the gardens vary each year varies. "
Sorry, in this context, I don't understand the clause, "Paint great incredible corners and such fragments of the slightest ones frozen poetry." If you explain, paraphrase in English, or write the entire sentence in Russian, I'll try again to help.
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The collocation "hard rain" is possible, but has a different connotation than "heavy rain." "Heavy rain" brings to mind a great quantity of rain. "Hard rain" refers not so much to quantity, but the force with which the rain falls to the earth.
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That's very kind of you. Good luck with your writing!
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Thank you,and wish you a good day. If one day in this life you will desire to have your portret from ukrainian painter, call me .
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Valentin, I can't write the text for you, it's not my job.:) As a teacher, I gladly give advice. I can also advise you to start learning collocations. Collocation is a pair or a group of words that usually go together. For example, a native english speaker will understand you if you say 'hard rain', but it doesn't sound natural. they say 'heavy rain'. that's an example of a collocation. Learning them will improve your writing skills. You can buy a collocation dictionary or a series of books called 'collocations in use'.
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