Can Someone Please Check These 2 Formal Memos

memo1

To: General Manager
From: Wang Gang, Manager of Roongxinn Ex-im Company
Date: 16th Jan.
Re.: Delivery of Goods

Mr Wang Gang called at 9 a.m. He said they haven't received our goods so far. We should contact
him immediately if we haven't delivered the goods yet. Otherwise they would will have to cancel the order.


memo2

To: General Manager
From: Wang Ning, Manager of Xinnchenng Company
Date: 16th Jan.
Subject: New Food Factory

Mr Wang Ming came here to visit the general manager at 10 am. He hoped to talk with the General over the matter concerning opening a food factory in our city.

Mr Wang is to leave next Monday. He asked the General Manager to call him this afternoon.