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a moment with some lyrics i live in a city with some interesting moments in the sky. Sometimes, this is very dark, sad and many people think about a sunny moment in this strange sky. Sometimes, this is very blue, nice and happy, many people are on the street, enjoy the moment, but some of them think about a dark sky, san, rain this sky is confuse about these people and think "what can i do? " So, this sky decided to have dark and happy moments in the same time. People see streets dark, sad, rain and 2 block later, they see a happy and beautiful moments

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A moment with some lyrics

I live in a city with some interesting moments in the sky.

Sometimes, it is very dark, sad and many people think about a sunny moment in this strange sky.

Sometimes, it is very blue, nice and happy, many people are on the street, enjoying the moment, but some of them think about a dark sky, (sadness?), rain
this sky is confusing for these people and they think "what can I do? "
So, this sky decided to have dark and happy moments in the same time.
People see dark, sad, and rainy streets and 2 blocks later, they see a happy and beautiful moments.

 

Very poetic, remember to put adjectives before nouns, like in the example rainy streets. Great job!

 

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