Salamanca 

I would like to talk about a city, that in despite of being very unknowedge unknown, is a wonderful place to visit. Salamanca is a town located in the centre-west [we can also say "central west"] of Spain.

It 's small enough for going walking to everywhere, and it's big enough for to not get bored.
This city is famous for its University, which is the oldest one in Spain and the eighth oldest in Europe, one position below of Cambridge University. It has faculties of medicine university, pharmacy, IT engineering, university of law, chemical engineering...

When you walk along its streets you can feel that is a different city because there are a lot of students, in other words, you can will breathe its youth and vitality. In fact, it is one of the favourite destinations of for Erasmus students. Due to it's being a university city, there are a lot of discounts in for drinks and menus meals. The best day to visit it is on Thursday and the worst during the weekend because most of the students go back at home to fill the tupperware. [this is a wonderful phrase :-) ]

Besides As well/In addtion, it has a wonderful monuments, for example, the cathedral, the San Esteban convent, the house of the shells, the mayor main square,.. built with Villamayor stone which provides them of a beautiful yellow shine when the sun goes down. Other place very important places is are the Calixto and Melibea Park, scenery of the La Celestina book.

But like everything, Salamanca isn't perfect. Its Achilles' heel is the cold. It's a very freezing city.

Salamanca (Could you please check out my essay?)

I would like to talk about a city that in despite of being very unknowedge unknown is a wonderful place to visit. Salamanca is a town located in the centre-west (I would say "mid-west" but they may be an American thing) of Spain.

It 's small enough for going walking to walk everywhere, and it's yet big enough for to not get bored.
This city is famous for its University which is the oldest one in Spain and the eighth in Europe, one position below of Cambridge University. It has medicine medical university, pharmacy, IT engineering, university of law, Chemical engineering,...

When you walk along its streets you can feel that it is a different city because there are a lot of students, in other words, you can breathe youth and vitality. In fact, it is one of the favourite destinations of erasmus students. Due to Because it's a university city there are a lot of discounts in on drinks and menus. The best day to visit it is on Thursday and the worst is during the weekend because most of the students go back at home to fill the tuperware.

Besides Also, it has a wonderfull monuments. For example, the cathedral, the san esteban convent, the house of the shells, the mayor square,.. built with Villamayor stone which provides them of a beautiful yellow when the sun goes down. OAnother place very important is the Calixto and Melibea park, scenaery of the La celestina book.

But like everything, Salamanca isn't perfect. Its Achilles heel is the cold weather. It's a very freezing cold city.

Good job Ms. Garcia!