I visited

I visited London las week. It is a beautiful city. I hope to go back soon. I went sightseeing, visiting a lot of places around the town. I went with my boyfriend. We went to London to improve our english language and to visit the city.
We went to school in the morning. The school was in the middle of the city and, when we finished our lessons, we were able to go tour.
I liked English School. I met many new people and I got to know differents lores (cultures?).
Me and my boyfriend didn't go to the same class because his English is better than mine. We hoped to refine on our English, but we staied in London for only one week, so we improved our language just a little bit, but it's better than nothing.

We had to eat lunch at the canteen of the school (cafeteria?). In the evening we had dinner at a pub. Oh, I liked fish and chips, it's very good!
We ate pizza also, but italian pizza is the best pizza in the world! ;-p

Questo l'ho corretto io un po' ma se lo posti nella sezione inglese, te lo possono correggere i magrelingua inglesi, mentre qui girano i madrelingua italiani per correggere esercizi in italiano.

I visited

I visited London las week. It is a beautiful city. I hope to go back early. I went sightseeing a lot of places around. I went with my boyfriend. We went to London to improve our english language and to visit the city.
We went to school in the morning. The school was at the middle of city and, when we finished lessons we were possibly going to tour.
I liked English School. I met many new people and I knew differents lores.
Me and my boyfriend didn't go at the same class because his English is better than mine. We hoped to refine on our English, but we staied in London for only one week, and we improved our languege a bit, but it's better than nothing.

We had ti eat lunch at the canteen of the school. In the evening we had dinner at pub. Oh, I liked fish and chips, it's very good!
We ate pizza also, but italian pizza is the best pizza in the world! ;-p

I visited London last week. It is a beautiful city. I hope to go back soon. I went sightseeing around a lot of places with my boyfriend. We went to London to improve our English language and to visit the city.
We went to school in the morning. The school was in the city centre and, when we finished lessons, we were able to go out (and explore).
I liked the English School. I met many new people and I discovered different customs.
My boyfriend didn't go to the same class as me because his English is better than mine. We hoped to improve our English, but we were in London for only one week, and our language improved only slightly, but that's better than nothing.

We had to eat lunch in the canteen of the school. In the evening we had dinner at a pub. Oh, I liked fish and chips - it's very good! We ate pizza also, but Italian pizza is the best pizza in the world!

I hope you are able to return to London soon -  there are always new things to see and places to visit !

I visited

I visited London last week. It is a beautiful city. I hope to go back soon. I went sightseeing around a lot of places. I went with my boyfriend. We went to London to improve our English language and to visit the city.
We went to school in the mornings. The school was in the middle of city centre, and when we finished lessons we were possibly going to tour would look around.

The would here means you typically did this in the past, but probably not after every class.

I liked the English school. I met many new people and I knew differents lores. (I don't understand. Do you mean cultures?)

Me and My boyfriend and I didn't go to the same class because his English is better than mine. We were hoping to refine on our English, but we stayed in London for only one week, and we improved our language only a little bit. Still, it's better than nothing!

We had ti eat lunch in the school canteen, of the school. and in the evenings we had dinner at a pub. Oh, I love fish and chips, it's so good!

We also ate pizza, but Italian pizza is the best pizza in the world! ;-p