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Guys, please help me to write this text correctly/ report of voluntary project/ part 1 Photo Marathon in Reykjavik. I'll not write enthusiastic words about the past, they've had enough said. It's been 5 days since I returned home, and awareness of the past does not rest to me. What can I identifie as the most memorable moments of the trip? 1) Devil's weather: snow, rain, wind (20-30m), drifts, ice, puddles: all above you can see for a period of one day. 2) New Year's fireworks. Picture this: it's dark, we staying on the observation deck of the capital of Iceland; bright flashes bursting from all directions for several hours, you see twinkles for a mere moment, befor all falls still again - the lights and sounds were almost overwhelming. The same time it was pouring rain, we were wet, were frozen, but our faces are not disappearing smile, and we were happy, we hugged each passer and wished them Happy New Year, and everyone feeled up to present children's joy, that feelings we forgot long ago.

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Guys, please help me to write this text correctly/ report of voluntary project/ part 1

Photo Marathon in Reykjavik.
I'll not write enthusiastic emotional words about the past, they've had enough enough has already been said, but it's been 5 days since I returned home  and awareness the memories of the past does do not let me rest to me.
What can I identifie as say were the most memorable moments of the trip?
1) Devil's weather: snow, rain, wind (20-30m), drifts, ice, puddles-- all above you can see for a period of one we saw all of these in a single day.
2) New Year's fireworks-- Picture this: it's dark, we're standing staying on the observation deck of the capital of Iceland; for hours, bright flashes bursting from all directions and  for several hours you see twinkles for a mere moment  before all everything falls still again -- the lights and sounds were almost overwhelming. At the same time it was pouring rain, we were wet, were frozen, but our faces are not disappearing smile we could not keep from smiling. and We were happy, we hugged each passerby and wished them a Happy New Year. At that moment, and everyone feeled up to present children's felt joy, like a child, that the feelings we forgot long ago. You could also say "like a child, feelings long ago forgotten" which is more poetic, more formal.) 


(It sounds like a wonderful night in Iceland.)

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Photo Marathon in Reykjavik.
I'll not write emotional words about the past, enough has already been said, but it's been 5 days since I returned home and the memories don't let me rest.
What can I say were the most memorable moments of the trip?
1) Devil's weather: snow, rain, wind (20-30m), drifts, ice, puddles-- we saw all of these in a single day.
2) New Year's fireworks-- Picture this: it's dark, we're standing on the observation deck of the capital of Iceland; for hours, bright flashes burst from all directions and you see twinkles for a moment before everything falls still again -- the lights and sounds were almost overwhelming. At the same time it was pouring rain, we were wet, frozen, but we could not keep from smiling. We were happy, we hugged each passerby and wished them a Happy New Year. At that moment,everyone felt joy, like a child, feelings long ago forgotten.

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