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命题作文练习 Dear Mrs. Angel, Haven't seen you for a long time . I was excited to recive the e-mail from you . The situations of me and our school are as follows. As a grade 3 senior high school student , there is no doubt that I am busy with the National College Entrance Examination. However , tired but happy , I feel well worth fighting for the future. When it comes to my school , she has been moved to an advanced new campus , where the scenary is graceful . Due to tight time , most students live on campus. I'd like to show you around when you come back . We all miss you so much ! Yours, LiHua

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命题作文练习

Dear Mrs. Angel,

Haven't seen you for a long time. I was excited to recive the e-mail from you . The situation with me and our school are as follows.

As a grade 3 senior high school student, there is no doubt that I am busy with the National College Entrance Examination. Although tired but happy , I feel it is well worth fighting for the future.

When it comes to my school, it has been moved to an advanced new campus , where the scenery is graceful . Due to tight time, most students live on campus.

I'd like to show you around when you come back . We all miss you so much !

Yours,
LiHua

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Dear Mrs. Angel,

Haven't seen you for a long time . I was waiting eagerly to recive the e-mail from you. Here below is my situation:

As a grade 3 senior high school student, there is no doubt that I am busy with the National College Entrance Examination. Tired but happy, I feel it is worth fighting for the future.

As for my school, it has been moved to a new campus, where the scenery is beautiful. Due to tight time schedules, most students live on campus.

I'd like to show you around when you come back. We all miss you so much!

Yours,
Lihua

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