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According a to the photograph , a topic about the health The man is eating a hamburguer with a lot of condiments and i can see the dish he is eating has a lot of crisps and there are a sauce ,it seems like ketchup. For drinking he is having a beer.Sumarazing the situacion i think that is not a healthy dish and less for a person who is fat.This dish seems like it has a good taste and its the favorite for a lot of people who dont care about your weight and health, and the most the love is eating above other things in life. This dish could be bad for his cholesterol because it has a lot of grease, this could cause him to be fatter driving him difficulties to move.In my country there arent controls about eating this kind i think that if you are grow up enough you should be responsible about what you are eatingand how it can affect to your health on the other hand if you are a child your fathers should to say you and to cook to you what is really and healthy for your nutrition.

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According a to the photograph , a topic about the health

The man is eating a hamburguer with a lot of condiments and i can see the dish he is eating has a lot of crisps and there are is a sauce; it seems like ketchup. For drinking (better: for his drink,) he is having a beer. Summarazing the situation i think that is not a healthy dish and less (better: especially) for a person who is fat.This dish seems like it has a good taste (better: this dish tastes good) and its the favorite for a lot of people who dont care about their weight and health, and the most the love is eating above other things in life.
This dish could be bad for his cholesterol because it has a lot of grease. This could cause him to be fatter driving causing him difficulties to move (better: difficulties in getting around).In my country there arent controls about eating this way. i think that if you are grown up enough you should be responsible about what you are eating and how it can affect to your health. On the other hand, if you are a child your father should tell you and to cook for you what is really good and healthy for your nutrition.

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