A Plenty Day
I called a cheaner to come to my house this morning.Then she helped me to tidy the dusty room.I threw a lot of garbage.Now I live in a very comfortable surrounding.
In the afternoon when my husband and I finished lunch,he tried to start his job at home.He wanted to draw some pictures about his landscape design's concept.And I told him to refer SANNA's architect design pictures which draw by hand.He tried it hard and at last he made it.Both of us felt happy because the drawings were pretty decent.
It was really a busy and plenty day and I'm going to rest now.
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A Busy Day
I arranged for a cleaner to come to my house this morning.
Then she helped me to tidy the dusty room.
I threw out a lot of garbage.
Now I live in a very comfortable surroundings. [ I understand what you're trying to say here. Better would be something like: Finally my house feels clean and comfortable ]
In the afternoon when[/after] my husband and I had finished lunch, he tried to start working from home.
He wanted to draw some pictures of/for his landscape design's concept.
And I told him to take a look at SANNA's architect design pictures, which are drawn by hand.
He worked hard and [eventually] finished some drawing.
Both of us felt happy because the drawings were[/turned out] pretty decent.
It was a really a busy and plenty day and now I'm going to rest now.
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