Today's writing2: What do you want to say?

5. Counsel your friend to stop smoking. Tell him both why and how.
Hey. You still haven’t quit smoking. You promise me you will quit smoke smoking very soon. I thought you join quit smoking clinic. I may might be disappointed. You because you don’t keep up your appointment. We will go to quit smoking clinic this afternoon  See you after the class.

6. How would you advise one of your parents to exercise more?
Pa and ma we promise we would go to travel more than 10 times this year. We have Korean new year after a month. I booked a travel package for the days. The program activity includes hiking. I believe it will be fun. And you have high-end hiking stuffs. We will go to hike at After the that days after then we will go to hike every weekend.

7. Tell your boyfriend(or girlfriend) to be sure to carry a good sunscreen on his or her summer vacation.
Honey, have you ever heard that the ozone layer area has been corrupted damage for almost since 10 years ago already. As latest studies result staes that this summer it will be most thinnest ever. So ultra violet rays will hurt harm your skin. I think your skin is so thin. So I would recommend you should carry that you will bring a good sunscreen on your summer vacation.

8. Tell your classmates not to give up English.
I would like to know some methods to improve my English skills. In the past, we usually focused on reading, I mean just understanding whatever the text is writing saying. It was focusing on interpreting it in Korean. I think it isn’t learning foreign language. I think it is the reason why, even though you memorize so hard vocabulary words everyday , you are still not fluent to in speaking and listening English. Listening, writing, reading, speaking, those are so important. So try them every day.

***Hopefully the corections will be helpful for you!