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Should I leave you die? I was seeing an old documentary about airplane crash and what we should do to survive. There was several conversations to people who survived crashes. There was one quit interesting, a Michigan flight crashed which a doughtier, grandma was survived. The doughtier explained that she heard a lot of noise at the moment of crash and they landed upside down, almost half people on that flight died. Then she detailed that she loosen her seat belt when she was upside down and she wanted to loosen her grandma seat belt. She didn't success though she tried several times, she was panic, and she asked her grandma permission if she can go and ran, and her grandma replied "of course my life".

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Should I leave you to die?

I was seeing watching an old documentary about airplane crashes and what we should do to survive. There was were several conversations to with people who survived crashes. There was One in particular was quite interesting; a Michigan flight crashed which a doughtier granddaughter and grandma was survived. The doughtier granddaughter explained that she heard a lot of noise at the moment of the crash, and they landed upside down; almost half of the people on that flight died. Then she detailed that she loosened her seat belt when she was upside down and she wanted to loosen her grandma's seat belt. She didn't success succeed though she tried several times. She was panicked, and she asked her grandma's permission if she can go and ran to run away, and her grandma replied, "Of course, My Life".

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"several conversations" or "several interviews"?

I think in this case it is better to use "grandmother" instead of "grandma".

She panicked and asked her...or... In a panic, she asked her .....


"My Life" ...

What comfort for the grandmother to know that her granddaughter could escape such an accident!

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Salam Mohsen, you might be interested in this movie which is about a true story of a plane crash and how passengers survived for more than two months: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Alive_%281993_film%29

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