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ON 3 2015 Today is Chinese holiday.I got up early and ate breakfast.and then I went out with my best friend.we met at downtown.so many people in there,it was crowded. many stores are discounting,we went shopping together,after lunch we went to the west lake.there are many people too,we rode a bike around the west lake,I'm excites because it was my fist time ride a bike at the west lake,The scenery of the west lake is very beautiful!

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ON 3 2015

Today is a Chinese holiday/holiday in China. I got up early and ate breakfast, and then I went out with (no, not with, since you met her 'downtown') my best friend. We met at ('at' is precise, but 'downtown' is vague and general - 'at a downtown shopping plaza' ) downtown. So many people in there! It was very crowded. Many stores are discounting/having sales/offering discounts, (usually 'discounting' has an object - like 'discounting clothes') so we went shopping together. After lunch we went to the West Lake, and found there are many people was very crowded too. We each rode a rental bike around the west lake, and I was so I'm excited because it was my first time riding a bike around at the West Lake - the lake scenery of the west lake is very beautiful!

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Today is Chinese holiday. I got up early and ate breakfast. Then I went out with my best friend. We met at downtown , it was  very crowded. Many stores are giving discounts. We went shopping together. After lunch we went to the West Lake. There are many people there too, we rode on a bike around the West Lake. I was excited as it was my first bike ride at West Lake,The scenery of West Lake is very beautiful!

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