Search from various English teachers...
China flagyy1204
Ramandan If you are a muslim,you know Ramanda.You should fasting,it's mean you have to resist you temptation,you will feel hungry,in this month,muslim have breakfast befor sun rise,and have dinner after sun down,they will donate money or gift to people who need or poor.muslim will go islamic temple callde mosque,they get together ,talk and eat sweet,in some place even go movie theatre or coffee shop.They pray together,and thank to god give them enough food .In Ramadan,they should discipline,after fasting,they will reward.

Corrections · 1

1

Ramadan/

If you are a Muslim, you know Ramadan. You should be fasting/must fast, it's meaning you have to resist your temptation, although you will feel hungry. In Throughout this month, Muslims have breakfast before sunrise, and have dinner after sundown, they will donate money or gifts to people who are needy or poor. Muslims will go Islamic templea called mosques, they get together, talk and eat sweets, in some places even go movie theatres or coffee shops. They pray together, and offer thanks to God for giving them enough food. During In Ramadan, they should discipline themselves, and after fasting, they will be rewarded.

 

Punctuation: Commas, fullstops, semi-colons etc - all have a space afterwards, not before.

Want to progress faster?

Join this learning community and try out free exercises!

Don’t miss out on the opportunity to learn a language from the comfort of your own home. Browse our selection of experienced language tutors and enroll in your first lesson now!

Start Learning Today