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PLEASEHELP :) I was gonna put this this photo gift one month ago but it’s almost New Year 2015 anyway, so still a good moment to say thanks. I’d like to thank with my whole heart to all folks who had given me a place to sleep within my 2 months of homelessness and to all who had supported me this time. Withing 5years time I’ve spent in Wrocław as a student I had been living in 4 flats with 7 different people and here during 2 months time I ve been leaving in 7 flats with about 13 different people all generous and caring always asking if my next host is kind with and if i’m safe or not ^^. Sometimes it’s better to pass trought difficult time to realise how much people good people hang out around you. MANY THANKS and… let me apologize to do not invite you all to drink but as I now have roof under my head I’m still poor as before. Ah god it’s time to start my 3th job here anyway… ;) THANKS GOD IT’S COUCHSURFING.

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PLEASEHELP Please Help :)

 

I was gonna going to put this up this photo gift one a month ago but it’s almost New Year's 2015. Anyway, so it's still a good moment {=time} to say thanks. I’d like to thank with my whole heart to from the bottom of my heart all the folks who had given me a place to sleep within during my 2 two* months of homelessness, and to all who had supported me during this time. Withing 5 During the five* years timeI’ve I had {I'd} spent in Wrocław as a student, I had been living lived in 4 four* flats with 7 seven* different people and here, during 2 in my two months, time I've been leaving living in 7 seven* flats with about 13 different people, all generous and caring, always asking if my next host is kind with to me and if I’m safe or not ^^. Sometimes, it’s better to pass throught a difficult time to realise** how much people many good people hang out are around {or "good people surround"} you. MANY THANKS and… let me apologize** to do that I cannot invite you all to a drink but, as I now have roof under over my head, I’m still as poor as before. Ah, God, it’s time to start my 3th third*** job here anyway… ;) THANKS GOD IT’S for COUCHSURFING.

 

 

General comment: I get that this is informal writing, but it shouldn't be an excuse for being a bit sloppy on spelling, capitalization and punctuation. It is mostly understandable though.

 

*Numbers up to ten are written out in English.

**The spelling of "realise" here is British, but the spelling of "apologize" is American. It helps to be consistent: either "realise/apologise" or "realize/apologize".

***The abbreviation for "third" is "3rd".

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I really enjoyed reading your experience! Keep it up! I wish you all the best!
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PLEASEHELP :)

I was going put up this photo gift one month ago, but it’s almost New Years, 2015. It's still a good moment to say thanks. I’d like to say thank you with my whole heart to all of the folks who have given me a place to sleep within the 2 months of me being homeless, and to all who had supported me during this time. Within the 5 years I had spent in Wrocław as a student, I had been living in 4 flats with 7 different people. The past 2 months I've been living in 7 flats with about 13 different people. They are all generous and caring, always asking me if my next host is kind and if i’m safe or not ^^. Sometimes, it’s good to pass through difficult times to help you realise how many good people there are around you. MANY THANKS and… let me apologize that I could not invite you all to drink. Although I have a roof under my head, I’m still as poor as before. Ah god it’s time to start my 3rd job here. anyway… ;) THANK GOD FOR COUCHSURFING.

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