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PLEASEHELP Please Help :)
I was gonna going to put this up this photo gift one a month ago but it’s almost New Year's 2015. Anyway, so it's still a good moment {=time} to say thanks. I’d like to thank with my whole heart to from the bottom of my heart all the folks who had given me a place to sleep within during my 2 two* months of homelessness, and to all who had supported me during this time. Withing 5 During the five* years timeI’ve I had {I'd} spent in Wrocław as a student, I had been living lived in 4 four* flats with 7 seven* different people and here, during 2 in my two months, time I've been leaving living in 7 seven* flats with about 13 different people, all generous and caring, always asking if my next host is kind with to me and if I’m safe or not ^^. Sometimes, it’s better to pass throught a difficult time to realise** how much people many good people hang out are around {or "good people surround"} you. MANY THANKS and… let me apologize** to do that I cannot invite you all to a drink but, as I now have roof under over my head, I’m still as poor as before. Ah, God, it’s time to start my 3th third*** job here anyway… ;) THANKS GOD IT’S for COUCHSURFING.
General comment: I get that this is informal writing, but it shouldn't be an excuse for being a bit sloppy on spelling, capitalization and punctuation. It is mostly understandable though.
*Numbers up to ten are written out in English.
**The spelling of "realise" here is British, but the spelling of "apologize" is American. It helps to be consistent: either "realise/apologise" or "realize/apologize".
***The abbreviation for "third" is "3rd".
PLEASEHELP :)
I was going put up this photo gift one month ago, but it’s almost New Years, 2015. It's still a good moment to say thanks. I’d like to say thank you with my whole heart to all of the folks who have given me a place to sleep within the 2 months of me being homeless, and to all who had supported me during this time. Within the 5 years I had spent in Wrocław as a student, I had been living in 4 flats with 7 different people. The past 2 months I've been living in 7 flats with about 13 different people. They are all generous and caring, always asking me if my next host is kind and if i’m safe or not ^^. Sometimes, it’s good to pass through difficult times to help you realise how many good people there are around you. MANY THANKS and… let me apologize that I could not invite you all to drink. Although I have a roof under my head, I’m still as poor as before. Ah god it’s time to start my 3rd job here. anyway… ;) THANK GOD FOR COUCHSURFING.
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