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2015!!! Wow, we are in 2015 now! I cannot believe:) I feel like it was just yesterday that I lay in my bed and looked at the calendar with a painted Nesquik and it was in 2001. I was so little girl with so many hopes and plans which I wanted to implement. And what I see now when I look at myself?)I see a girl with so many hopes and plans which I intend to implement :D, just maybe now I become self reliant and know better that I really want to do. I want to wish everyone to be happy and purposeful in the new year and your dreams come true:)Happy New Year, guys!

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     I cannot believe that we are in 2015 now. It feels like just yesterday I was laying in my bed and looking at my Nesquik calendar, and that was in 2001. I was such little girl with so many hopes and dreams. And what do I see when I look at myself now? I see a woman with so many hopes and dreams, but maybe now I have become self-reliant and know what I really want to do.
     I wish everyone a happy and purposeful New Year, and may your dreams come true. Happy New Year, guys. 

     Very good, Nasya. Good luck to you in 2015. 

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2015!!!

Wow, we are in 2015 now! I cannot believe it:) I feel like it was It seems just yesterday that I was lying lay (you lay eggs) in my bed and looking at the calendar with a painted picture of Nesquik and - it was in 2001. I was so such a little girl with so many hopes and plans which/that I wanted to implement. And what do I see now when I look at myself?) I still see a girl with so many hopes and plans which/that I intend to implement :D, but just maybe now I have become more self reliant, and know better that what I really want to do. I want to wish everyone to be happiness, and hope you can find purposeful in the new year and - may your dreams come true:) Happy New Year, guys!

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2015!!!

Wow, we are in 2015 now! I cannot believe it. :) I feel like it was just yesterday that I lay in my bed and looked at the calendar with a painted Nesquik [?] and it was in 2001. I was so such a little girl with so many hopes and plans which I wanted to implement. And what I see now when I look at myself? ) I see a girl with so many hopes and plans which I intend to implement. :D, just Maybe now I have become self reliant and know have a better idea of wthat I really want to do. I want to wish everyone to be happy and purposeful in the new year and that your dreams come true. :) Happy New Year, guys!

 

Nasya, I've tried to keep changes to a minimum.

"Painted Nesquick" - I remember Nesquick as a a flavoured drink with milk. Is that what you meant? 'Painted' usually refers to an object like "A painted table".

A calendar would usually have pictures or photos or drawings.

You could have used "happen" rather than "implement".

Why do you not wish everyone a Happy New Year?

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Just a tip don't start sentences with "and." Happy new year!
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2015!!!

Wow, we are in 2015 now! I cannot believe it:) I feel like it was just yesterday that I laid in my bed and looked at the calendar with a painted Nesquik and it was in 2001. I was a so little girl with so many hopes and plans which that  I wanted to implement. And What do I see now when I look at myself?I see a girl with so many hopes and plans which I intend to implement :D, just Maybe, now I can become self-reliant and know what  better that I really want to do. I want to wish everyone to be happiness and purposeful in the new year and that  your dreams come true:)Happy New Year, guys!

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