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Trying to learn to write in english It was dark outside. The train stoped so quickly that half the people tumble down the floor. I was looking for him, I knew we stoped because of him, he was trying to escape this place as soon as possible. I took a glance at the girl, I wish I had not done that. Her bloody face stucked in my mind. I was still looking for some movements over the train. Suddenly, I saw something getting through the light from lamps near railway. The same clothes and filled with fear eyes, It definetly was him. As he running I managed to catch a sight of thing similar to a peace of paper which fall from his pocket. He did not noticed it and keep going from what he had done. I got to the door as fast as I can.

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Trying to learn to write in English

It was dark outside. The train stoped so quickly that half the people tumbled down the floor. I was looking for him, I knew we stoped because of him, he was trying to escape this place as soon as possible. I took a glance at the girl. I wish I had not done that. Her bloody face stuck in my mind. I was still looking over the train for some movement. Suddenly, I saw something through the light from lamps near the rails. The same clothes and eyes filled with fear, it definetly was him. As he ran, I managed to catch sight of something similar to a peace of paper which fell from his pocket. He didn't notice it and kept running from what he had done. I got to the door as fast as I could.

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Well done! A few corrections, mostly for past tense (in the past, you say "could" instead of "can") and style. Keep up the great work!

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