Trista's homework entry: Jun 10, 2010
This is an essay about college students' mental health,hoping you correct its errors and give me some suggestions about its structure and content.(It's best to show me some nice sentences) Thank you very much!
Just like the physical health,the mental health of students is really important.There is a lot of students commit crimes recently.So,it's necessary to improve our college steudents'capacity of bearing pressure.
Because of that,the school should take measures for it.Firstly,encouraging students talking with their friends,classmates and teachers.Secondly,a solite should be setted up to accept students who has confusion and sorrow.And they could say out anything they want to.Certainly,the school must serve an open circumstance and give freedom to every student.
What should we do as a student?I think we should make many friends and be pleased to share our happiness and sorrow with them usually.In addition,smile is a pretty gift for everyone,smiling often,we will feel relaxed and find problems easy solved.
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Corrections · 4
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You must put a space after commas and fullstops.
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这个你很犀利啊~
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you write well you should only put comma and space...^^fighting^^
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