Animal tests
Over the few decades,increasing numbers of animals are killed by people,especially scientists and researchers,for some experimental purposes.However,while these experiments have brought many benefits to human beings,it can be argued that these researches have resulted in more negative impacts than positive.
It is evident that animal experiments have brought out many advances in some specific areas like medical industry.For example,people who unfortunately have severe diseases will have more chances to be cured,with the help of live-saving medicines,many of which are continuously developed by animal experiments.Therefore,we can not deny their contributions.
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Hi Jim. Your english seems excellent and very professional. Because it is so good I might just suggest making a space after every full stop and comma, so it really looks worthy of presentation or publication anywhere.
It seems to me that '...medical industry.For example..' should actually read 'medical industry, for example', i.e. not a new sentence. However the sentence then becomes very long so I might suggest;
'It is evident that animal experiments have brought out many advances in some specific areas like medical industry, for example, people who unfortunately have severe diseases. These people will have more chances to be cured, with the help of live-saving medicines, many of which are continuously developed by animal experiments.'
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