Could you proofread the following note? The topic is work.

1) Do you think there will be any changes in working hours in the future?
I think there will be great changes in working hours. They will be reduced. With the development of modern technologies, much work may be done by robots and computers. Thanks to their developers, people have more free time.

Another reason is that the younger generation will want more leisure time rather than devote their lives to their companies.

Lastly, many countries have fewer jobs to offer, so instead of reducing working hours, they will offer job sharing. This will allow countries to hire more people, which could be a good solution for reducing job losses in the future.


2) What important skills do you think will be required for successful workers in the workplace of tomorrow ?
Communication skill will be required for successful workers in the workplace of tomorrow. Since information accumulates so fast, it is difficult to know everything. Thus, it is becoming necessary that every professional be able to communicate and consult with other experts at work. When someone is good at communication, he or she could be successful at finishing certain projects in future.


3) What jobs do you think will disappear in 50 years?
I think that computer-related jobs will be diminished. For example, the number of bank tellers and chasers has decreased as they have been replaced with automatic machines. Thus, in the near future, I believe their jobs will be done by robots or computers.


4) What is the role of jobs in people’s lives?
Jobs help people to live independently as an adult, since paying bills is necessary to live. Besides, having a job is important for distinguishing my identity and for achieving my dream. In addition, jobs create a network for people. When we work, we are not usually on our own. We have coworkers and clients. Therefore, people have opportunities to meet new people and learn through jobs.

5) What jobs do you think will be in greater demand in the 10 years?
I would say nursing, especially those nurses who need to take care of the elderly in retirement houses. Taking care of the elderly is important. Many societies are facing the problem of an aging population alongside their low birthrate. The number of elders is getting larger and larger. Due to development of medical technology, people can live for 80 or even 100 years. Therefore, nurses will be in great demand in the near future.