Chon Seo
Hㅁppy birthday for my pretty boy .. i miss you .. ..wait me i will back and dont be flirt to other girls i ill kill you haha joke..its okay beacsue you really flirt haha joke.. ok take care Chon Seo yeah!
生日快乐！我不能在韩国写到这里中国
from: young hyun 영현 <3
nan dangsin eul geuliwo hago nan dangsin-i al-aseo sarang chon seo
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Chon Seo
Happy birthday for to my pretty boy .. I miss you .. ..wait for me, I will back, and dont be flirt to with other girls or I ill will kill you. Haha joke joking... It's okay beacsue because you really flirt haha joke joking... Ok take care Chon Seo
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生日快乐！我不能在韩国写到这里中国
from: young hyun 영현 <3
nan dangsin eul geuliwo hago nan dangsin-i al-aseo sarang chon seo
You've done really well! Most of your mistakes were simple punctuation errors.
Here is a "cleaned-up" version:
Chon Seo
Happy birthday to my pretty boy. I miss you. Wait for me because I will be back, and don't flirt with other girls or I will kill you. Haha, joking. It's okay because you're a flirt, haha joking. Okay, take care Chon Seo!
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Chon Seo
Hㅁppy birthday for my pretty boy .. i miss you .. ..wait me i will back and dont be flirt to other girls i ill kill you haha joke..its okay beacsue you really flirt haha joke.. ok take care Chon Seo yeah!
生日快乐！我不能在韩国写到这里中国 我不能在中国这里写到去韩国（아가씨가 지금도 중국이신가요? I guess you had gone to China and would be back soon）
from: young hyun 영현 <3
nan dangsin eul geuliwo hago nan dangsin-i al-aseo sarang chon seo
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我很喜欢看这样原生态直白的作文，但就是那句中文没看懂，有专家来解答一下嘛？
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