LIFE's Actual          [Actual life.]

Death never stops following us. People who die, every moment, every second... Life did is not be fair, and it always offereds options rather than showing us the right one spontaneously for we us to choose. Then we embellished it and called it destiny. We only saw what we wanted whereas and we did not [didn't / wouldn't] accept that everybody does is not always perfect.

Everybody has choices, and life gives us the options. Yes, absolutely life is cruel like everybody says, but people are more cruel. They always say that they let life slide, and then they create problems for everything. Already mandkind is always like this.

I think, everything is a reflection that comes from our heart. Finally if you imagine that outside is dark, first you should realise, see, and feel it. Otherwise can Pollyanna see everything - cakes and ale?

Not bad Ebru.

Den.

LIFE's Actual

Death never stops following us. People who die every moment, every second. Life did is not be fair. and It always offers options rather than showing the right choice instantly. spontaneously for we choose. Then we embellished it and called it destiny. We only saw see what we want whereas but we did do not accept that everybody does is not always perfect.

Everybody has is given a choices and life gives us the options. Yes, absolutely life is absolutely cruel like everybody says, but people are more crueler. They always say that they let life slide and but then they create problems. for everything. Already Mankind is has always been like this.

I think everything is a reflection that comes from our heart. Finally If you imagine that outside is dark, first you should realise, see, and feel it. Otherwise can Pollyanna see everything cakes and ale? [I'm not sure what you're trying to say in the two last sentence.]

There are a lot of unecessary words added to your sentences and sometimes the sentence structure is off but these are easily fixed. Keep up the work!