Adverbs

This is an exercise to see the difference between a text without adverbs and a text with adverbs.

Without adverbs:

Every morning I get up at 6.30 am because I start my work at 7 am in the kitchen when I make the breakfast for the kids. They eat and go upstairs for to get dressed. The girl gets dressed in her room and the boy in his room as well but he needs my help to put the his socks on. After that, I help them to brush their teeth. If everything it's is OK, they are ready at 8 am and they have time to play until 8.30 am. About this time I start to call the kids from the hall because it's time to go to school, but they want to continue playing and they reply and tell me that it is not time go to school yet. [You started in the present tense, so we must continue in the pesent tense] We are in the street at 8.40 am but I don't know how because it is very difficult get out of the home every morning.

With adverbs:

Every morning I get up at 6.30 am because I start my work at 7 am in the kitchen when I drowsily make drowsily the breakfast for kids. They eat quickly and go upstairs for to get dressed. The girl gets quietly gets dressed alone in her room and the boy grumpily in his room as well but he needs my help to put the his socks on. After that I help them to brush their teeth. If everything it's is OK they are usually are ready at 8 am and they have time to play until 8.30 am. About this time I nicely start to call the kids from the hall because it's time to go to school, but they want to continue playing and they reply and grumpily tell me that it is not time go to school yet. We are in the street always at 8.40 am but honestly I don't know how because it is very difficult get out of the home every morning.

Adverbs

This is a exercise to see the difference between a text without adverbs and a text with adverbs.

Without adverbs:

Every morning I get up at 6.30 am because I start my work at 7 am in the kitchen when I make the breakfast for kids. They eat and go up stairs for get dressed. The girl gets dressed in her room and the boy in his room as well but he need my help to put the socks on. After that I help them to brush the teeth. If everything it's ok they are ready at 8 am and they have time to play until 8.30 am. About this time I start to call the kids from the hall because it's time to go to school, but they want to continue playing and they replied and told me that is not time go to school. We are in the street at 8.40 am but I don't know how because is very difficult go out home every morning.

With adverbs:

Every morning I get up at 6.30 am because I start my work at 7 am in the kitchen when I make drowsily the breakfast for kids. They eat quickly and go up stairs to get dressed. The girl gets quietly dressed alone in her room and the boy grumpily in his room as well but he needs my help to put his socks on. After that I help them to brush their teeth. If everything is ok they usually are ready at 8 am and they have time to play until 8.30 am. About this time I nicely start to call the kids from the hall because it's time to go to school, but they want to continue playing and they replied and grumpily told me that is not time go to school. We are in the street always at 8.40 am but honestly I don't know how because is very difficult to get out of the house every morning.

nicely  or with my sweetest voice I start to call

grumpily  or grumbling they replied that it is not time

drowsily  sluggishly

tu eleccion de adverbos es correcto gramaticalemente pero no es como nativo.  No he escuchado o leido nunca grumpily, pero es verdad que la palabra existe, lo busque. Lo mismo para drowsily

Pero todo es bueno gracias para aprender ingles